Thursday, 30 August 2018

The Giraffe and the Little Girl

Walt: Write descriptive sentences.
For this activity we had to look at a picture and then write a story about it that uses description. Have any of you ever seen a little girl walking a little giraffe before? Well I haven't! In my story I imagined  this to happen. This is sort of a sad story and a happy story so here's my story. I hope you like it!

I think I need to use different types of adjectives next time like adjectives to describe texture, size and shape not just colour.

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