Hi Abby! Im glad you like my poem, Thanks for the nsl, Ill try to improve on that, Yes I have one other pet, Her name is Tink shes a very fluffy cat. -Kyah
Hi Kyah, what a lovely poem about your beautiful dog, Bella! I like that you added a cute photo of her sleeping. What kind of dog is she? My dog is about twenty different kinds of dog. Have you been taking Bella out for walks around your neighbourhood during lockdown? When my dog sees me put on my shoes he gets really excited and thinks we are going for a walk. Can't wait to see you next blog post! Mrs Gully
Hi Mrs Gully! Thank you, And the type of dog she is, is a American Staffy, Me and my sibblings and parents have been going on lots of walk with Bella during the lock down. -Kyah
Hi there Kyah, my name is Abby and I am a year 8 student at Yaldhurst Model School. WOW! What a amazing poem.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put in a picture of your dog, she is very cute. I also like that all the sentences match to make a good poem.
This reminds me of lots of acrostic poems that I used to have to do.
Maybe next time you could include some pictures of her doing those things or a DLO to make it more fun to read.
Do you have any other pets?
Kind regards,
Abby.
Hi Abby! Im glad you like my poem, Thanks for the nsl, Ill try to improve on that, Yes I have one other pet, Her name is Tink shes a very fluffy cat. -Kyah
DeleteHi Kyah, what a lovely poem about your beautiful dog, Bella! I like that you added a cute photo of her sleeping. What kind of dog is she? My dog is about twenty different kinds of dog. Have you been taking Bella out for walks around your neighbourhood during lockdown? When my dog sees me put on my shoes he gets really excited and thinks we are going for a walk. Can't wait to see you next blog post! Mrs Gully
ReplyDeleteHi Mrs Gully! Thank you, And the type of dog she is, is a American Staffy, Me and my sibblings and parents have been going on lots of walk with Bella during the lock down. -Kyah
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