WALT: Describe a personal treasure using descriptive language features
This is my treasure writing about my teddy bear. We had to think of something special to us so I chose to write about my teddy. I really enjoyed writing this activity because we got to choose something special to us to write about.
Do you have a special teddy like mine?
Well if you do that's great and is it the most precious thing to you? If it is, it's great.
Kia ora Zyah
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your writing about your personal treasure - your teddy bear. I found that you have described your treasure well and have included extra information like - why he is precious to you.
My personal treasure would be a silver locket necklace that my nana left for me. I keep it beside my bed and I think of her often when I look at it.
Kind regards
Mrs England