WALT: Add detail to our sentences to give detail to the reader.
For this activity we had to add a adjective a when , a where , a how , and a why!
firstly , we started off with a boring sentence! then we changed it to a even BETTER SENTENCE!!
Kia Ora Kyah its Lily here from Mamaku 1 I really liked how you made your work really colourful it looks very effective.Maybe next time make it a we bit bigger so that we can read it easier and maybe you could also write a bit more description. Keep up the good work. From Lily
Kia Ora Kyah its Lily here from Mamaku 1 I really liked how you made your work really colourful it looks very effective.Maybe next time make it a we bit bigger so that we can read it easier and maybe you could also write a bit more description.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work. From Lily