For this activity we had to look at a picture and then write a story about it that uses description. Have any of you ever seen a little girl walking a little giraffe before? Well I haven't! In my story I imagined this to happen. This is sort of a sad story and a happy story so here's my story. I hope you like it!
I think I need to use different types of adjectives next time like adjectives to describe texture, size and shape not just colour.
Hello Kyah, It's Caitlyn K here. I really the way you have used punctuation in the correct areas. To be honest, I have never seen a little girl with a giraffe before. But I have definitely seen giraffes before! What was your favorite part about, writing The Giraffe and the little girl? Well Done, Kyah Keep the great work up! From Caitlyn K, Totara 3.
ReplyDeleteHi Caitlyn, Kyah here i dont know if i have a favourite part about writing the story...
DeleteAnyways thanks for commenting on my blog!
Cya!
Hello Kyah Its Cleo here from Totara 3
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you have put the punctuation in the correct spots and the detail in the writing is really really good. What was the best part about writing this story? Maybe next time you could think about using different colours for your text otherwise Good Job!!
From Cleo
Hi Cleo, Kyah here i dont know what was the best part on writing the story but thank you for giving me advice!
DeleteI might take your advice on another blog post i make!
Bye for now!
Hi Kyah Jasmine here,from Mamaku 1 at Grey Main School!
ReplyDeleteWow that was a nice story! I haven't ever seen a young girl walking a little giraffe either!
Maybe next time you could try and make your story longer.
What was your favourite part of making this story?
Bye Kyah! 😋
Hi Jasmine!
DeleteKyah here my favourite part was probably...
Umm i dont know yet but i liked writing this story!