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Hi there Kyah, my name is Abby and I am a year 8 student at Yaldhurst Model School. WOW! What a amazing poem.I like the way you put in a picture of your dog, she is very cute. I also like that all the sentences match to make a good poem.This reminds me of lots of acrostic poems that I used to have to do.Maybe next time you could include some pictures of her doing those things or a DLO to make it more fun to read.Do you have any other pets?Kind regards,Abby.
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Hi there Kyah, my name is Abby and I am a year 8 student at Yaldhurst Model School. WOW! What a amazing poem.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put in a picture of your dog, she is very cute. I also like that all the sentences match to make a good poem.
This reminds me of lots of acrostic poems that I used to have to do.
Maybe next time you could include some pictures of her doing those things or a DLO to make it more fun to read.
Do you have any other pets?
Kind regards,
Abby.