Writing Scaffold
For this activity we had to write some things for how our hide and seek game would start, the crafting was the exact same bit your wrote in the "how does the game start section or something" but you just made it more . Heres mine and I hope you enjoy!
Hi Kyah, you have worked hard to craft your writing this week. You are thinking about using more precise verbs and adjectives to add detail which is great. You have built up the tension in the poem and make the reader want to read on and find out what happens. Your next step is to look at your use of punctuation and different sentence structures (short and long sentences) to enhance your writing even further. Keep up the great work. Mrs P
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